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A simile is a literary device used to make a comparison by showing the similarities of two different things. A simile draws a resemblance, in most cases using the words like or as, to create a direct comparison.
- She swam as gracefully as a swan.
- Confidence radiated off him like he owned the place, even though he was just a waiter.
- Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate. — William Shakespeare, Sonnet 18
When used correctly, similes are a powerful descriptive tool that engages readers, encouraging the imagination. Misused, similes can be nothing short of hilarious, maybe even shocking.
High School Hilarity
In the process of cleaning out a file cabinet, I found a folder full of “funny stuff” that floated around the Internet back in the 90’s. I wish I could take credit for compiling this list of high school’s most hilarious similes, but I can’t. I don’t even know the originator, or I’d give them credit.
Each of the following similes was taken from an actual high school essay or short story, punctuation and all. What makes them so hilarious is their innocence, not their ignorance. Enjoy!
- The thunder was ominous-sounding, much like the sound of a thin sheet of metal being shaken backstage during the storm scene in a play.
- She caught your eye like one of those pointy hook latches that used to dangle from screen doors and would fly up whenever you banged the door open again.
- The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn’t.
- McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup.
- The politician was gone but unnoticed, like the period after the Dr. on a Dr Pepper can.
- Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair after a sneeze.
- John and Mary had never met. They were like two hummingbirds who had also never met.
- Her vocabulary was as bad as, whatever.
- The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just like maggots when you fry them in hot grease.
- Her date was pleasant enough, but she knew that if her life was a movie, this guy would be buried in the credits as something like “second tall man”.
- Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed lovers race across the grassy field toward each other like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at 6:36 p.m. traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka at 4:19 p.m. at a speed of 35 mph.
- His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without Cling Free.
Jennifer Fais said:
That made me smile like a very bad simile on a dreary Monday morning!
Elizabeth Fais said:
A dreary Monday morning with a gelatinous layer of clouds clumped overhead like cold oatmeal stuck to the bottom of a bowl. 🙂